Chapter 24 is definitely part of Calyn’s darkest moment. Chapter 25 definitely covers decision time of the step outline. I have it blocked out. Instead of carefully moving through to work on smoothing out the transitions and polish the interacting sections of action and description, I’m moving on.
A lot of dialogue will have to be cut out of 26 since I’m recasting the scene, but a lot of the description can be smoothed into the approrpiate spots.
Kristin Wolden Nitz 