Well, I did go through the rest of Calyn’s story on paper. It will take time to get these corrections and new scenes transferred into the computer. But I like how things are working. Fortunately for me, a lot of the description from the earlier version can be moved around and re-used.
I have another stretch goal: I would really like to get a draft of this story to one of my live critique groups during the third week of November so that we can go over it for our December meeting.