Well, I did go through the rest of Calyn’s story on paper. It will take time to get these corrections and new scenes transferred into the computer. But I like how things are working. Fortunately for me, a lot of the description from the earlier version can be moved around and re-used.
I have another stretch goal: I would really like to get a draft of this story to one of my live critique groups during the third week of November so that we can go over it for our December meeting.
Kristin Wolden Nitz 